by Brian King Jul 17, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
You have gone so far away |
by Little Dot
Great job on this poem. I like the rhyme scheme and it's has a good flow thoughtout the whole poem. Keep up the good work. |
I loved your poem. Makes me kind of sad...cuz I can relate :) |
Awesome poem, Brian! very well done! |
by julie
very inpiring and i agree, i love the rhyming, it works very well |
by SarZz
Really cool!!!!!!! |