interesting title! cool to know some boys are interested in poety and they're not just doing it to 'win a girl's heart' or impress them. nice rhyme scheme by the way. take care:)

and... thanks for checking out the discussion board. i've posted some animals/creatures in harry potter. take care:)

I really liked this poem....especially these two lines
"My hate right now is so monsterously great
curse who ever came up with this fate"

I think those are the best lines of the poem...it's in the middle and looks like it's holding the poem together.....in a good way of course....great job

Really cool!!!!!!!

very inpiring and i agree, i love the rhyming, it works very well

Awesome poem, Brian! very well done!

I loved your poem. Makes me kind of sad...cuz I can relate :)

Great job on this poem. I like the rhyme scheme and it's has a good flow thoughtout the whole poem. Keep up the good work.
--Sarah--