i dunno who you are, but i love your poem, it hit me hard, and i think your an awesome writer, you will change someones life with those words

AWSOME !!!! thats all I have to say check out my poems { if u can } i have called " Her Own Suicide " also

Wow, this was just amazing. 5/5.

That was powerful

Who I was has died,
Who I am is dead,
What I am is a body,
With a bullet through the head,
-Irtine

This is amazing you really have a thing for words. Alot of ppl feel like this and im happy you found words to decribe such deep sadness. Keep rocken on man!