by Ş∂ņÄħy∂ Jul 17, 2004
category :
Internet slang /
love, romance
I wish I could sit with you |
by Robert
good but the ending again kinda left you hanging oh well good job take care and keep writing |
by ChildofGod87
Trincy, that was very good!!! I'm like....wow...great job girl...keep up the good work..wow...sorry can't stop sayin that!!! :) |
by Hannah M.
This is a great poem Trincy. I admire your ability to make this free form still flow wonderfully. I also liked the repeating lines. Great job, loved the poem. |
by Michelle
Beautifully written as ever...loved it!!! :) Michelle |
by jack
you make me wish i could sit with you without even knowing you. good work. |