wow...that is so sad! but it is really good. all i can say i wow....

this is so sad! but well written! nice work!

shit sun......lol good job i mean

that's a really really good poem! i hope your ok! you've got talent. i hope you keep writing cause i like reading your poems they are really good! =) check out mine sometime if you want

i like it. its good. i think that your good

when i read this i got the chills...it was soo sad but it was good!! *5* goood job

hehe aww thanx guys :) i was pretty down when i wrote this poem. but im fine, lifes sweet!!
xoxo dani

omg..that is so good!!..im a good advice giver(all my friends say)

if u need someone to talk to email me Jmangel55@yahoo.com

It was excellent! I loved it! It was a fantastic poem!

thanx babe:) u rule, luv dani

Excelent, so emotive

wow that was really sad, i hope you dont really feel that way!! well anyways that was a great poem. please check my pomes out also. thanks

who are you talking about? if you don't want to aswer it's cool.

Very beautful but so sad.. really enjoyed it

That was a really good poem, i liked it alot, thats exactly how i felt a while back, everythang was goin wrong, we moved out, me and my mom were arguing a whole lot, i was in a relationship where i wasn't happy anymore and i had a guy that was my best friend that i had fallen in love with, but he didn't know it. i was at home all by myself and was goin through alot and decided to end it so i was gonna take all these mixed pills,i had taken like 4 and the phone rang, it was beside me and i noticed that it was Jimmys number (my best friend that i was in love with) and i decided to answer and he blurted out "ashley theres sumthin i gotta tell you, i've wanted to tell you for a long time, but didn't know how you felt, I love you" i was in shock and i instantly dropped the pills cause i realized someone cared, we've been together ever since and now we are engaged, i told him about what happened and how he saved my life and he was so glad that he told me that he loved me that night, so always remember that someone out there loves you no matter what! great poem, sorry bout my long story, just wanted to let you know. 5 all the way!

I gave u a 5! This really hit a nerve! You have a way with words! keep up the good work! I have a poem about suicide too... check it out, if u get a chance!!

GReat poem! U have alot of talent. Keep the poems cummin.
-HUGS N KISSES!

I can relate alot to your poem its really good!!! your an awesome writer u have something good going here i wouldnt give up

Yeah darlin. That is fine :) I would be honoured!! I agree, im pretty sure something as depressing as that would raise heads. goodluck with ur presentation honey. all the best,
dani xoxo

Very sad, but also very touching! if i did have tears left in me, i would be sitting in a puddle! lol
luv em