:) oh cool, thanks for making comment Shirleymichael, I only just put the poem up 10 minutes ago... arrr, that made my day :)

So sweet and Romantic... Thats all i have to say about the matter. And the poem is well written well.

that was so lovely and great, raw emotion displayed in words, excellent!

Wow.. i didn't realise that i had read this before. Cool...

i love this poem..its fabulous ^_^ your such a good writer..<33
-Mortalidaga

Heh, I remember those star-filled nights when I used to do that very thing, good job on this one, its real good.

--Bryce~

ROTFLMAO, oh you are a good one Jay ;) "cant have light and darkness at the same time"... I guess I come across not being the romanic type... errr... since you are a guy, I don't think you'll see/experience my romanic side... ;) you know what Im saying :D:D Thanks for commenting bro :D

I kinda love it the way it is, its got beat and it leaves me speechlesss on what else i have to say. all i say now is that you have a wonderful talent and just keep writing,

:) Thank you everyone for your kind words, ...wow... its been 3 month since my first love poem, and sadly Im still writing "secret love" about the same special girl... oh well :) Once again, thank you all soooo much for commenting on this piece, it really means alot to me :)

thats beautiful

Nice poem