aww... im sorry if you feel that way i hope you get better. but it was a great poem all the same! well done

Thank you for your comment

I must say you really capyure the feeling of desperation and deepnes of futility-the emotion you evoke is overwhelming, perhaps neding toned down in spots and maybe revised/tightened up a bit, but it does flow well and just reall burns into the heart with such pain and sadness.Trust me, life is better than death:life is so short, death is forever.Hope things are looking up since you wrote this!