by DewiSri
Very nice poem, |
God hunni thats quite disturbing... one of my closest m8s has anorexia so severely she cant evn walk, she has 2 hav an n.g. tube permenantly down her nose so they can kp her alive. pls think about this and try and get yourself some help... xx |
by Marta
I know where you stand. I've become anorexic also. The pain hurts and it's very difficult. Just whenever you take that bite out of your burger, or sandwich, or sausage or whatever, what always helps me feel good, is I TRY to think good things about myself and what people like about me. Like for example, you're an extremely good writer. A very good poet who writes from the heart. It just always helps me out when I think those good things about myself and others. I'm trying to get back on track by eating healthy food and staying balanced. Inner beauty matters most. Nobody should be judging you from the outside just because you look different from everyone else. |
by Madison
wow that was an amazing poem. I'm feeling the same way, i hate the way i look, and feel, and at one point of time i did stop eating. Another time I started barfing. But thats not the topic, i loved the poem, very well written, keep up the good work! |
by Chloe
Thanks to everyone who commented, but I just want to make one thing clear: This poem is NOT about me. It's about my sister and her feelings. Once again, thanks :) |
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i no how u feel. Im exactly the same weigh. And my mom just called me a big today. she tried to take it back but i got mad at her i no the pain ur going thro but please lets just try to get thro this u can email me at monkeygrl142@yahoo.com |
by Krystal
It sucks that this happens, but I knwo that it is good to know that you are not alone, other people go through this, it is good to talk to someone about it, even though I am a stranger, I am here to talk!! we have the same problems! |
Hey Gurl, i have aneroxia too, i wrote a poem about to, but yours says it better, I've had anorexia for about 4 months now, and sometimes i'll eat but everytime i feel regret, i know how you feel, and how hard it is, Most people dont know about imy problem, but the ones who do, wont say anything, anyways this isnt the point, i just wanna say that this is such a great poem, and it says exactly what i've been wanting to say..Check out my poem that i wrote about anorexia.. if you have time.. |
omg im so sorry bout ur friend, this poem is amazing your lines are awesome and everything, im sorta anorexic i eat like once a day though cause my dad makes me..other times i just take food to my room and throw it out the window >.< i hope everyhting will be ok <3 luv u |
by Chelsey
Wow!! I'm so sorry to hear that about your friend or you whoever this was about! that was awsome and i walways hate saying sad poems were awsome but man you went with the flow of things and it was very strong!I really hate for people who are fat to be anerexic because just because people make fun of them they are just jerks because they dont know the inside of a person ya know? And if no one loves them theres always one person which is god you could be fat,skinny,tall, or short and god loves you...Being fat is definately nothing to kill yourself over! She doesnt have to be anerexic just eat little you know what i mean....i feel your pain i have a friend just like that...But about your poem! it was AWSome! GREAT JOB! I'm looking forward to seeing more! |
You have written the poem very well. The rhymes just flowed. I am also a victim of anerexia. But for me its the other way. i am too skinny. I don't know whats my problem..if i gain a little weight, i start hating food. Everybody scolds me for not eating.. I too want to gain weight.. But for some reason i can't eat. Every body says that i am doing it on purpose... They just don't know what i feel. Oh..yeah i know people have bigger problems..So let me also smile like your sister... |
by Sonya Marie
THIS POEM HURTS ME TO KNOW SO MANY SUFFER FROM THIS. I AM ON A DIET. BUT NOT ANOREXIA. I THINK IT'S NASTY TO SEE SOMEONE SO SAD, A SO SKINY. MY BF LUVZ MY BODY AND SO DO A LOT OF OTHER PPL AND I'M HAPPY NOT COMPLETELY SATISFIED BUT U GOT TO BE HAPPY WAT U GOT. AND ALL GIRLS CAN BE HAPPY AND NOT HAVE TO STARVE THEMSELVES. GRL I AM 140 N 5'6" AND THAT IS NOT CLOSE OF BEING THIN IT'S JUST NORMAL OR AVERAGE AND I'M COOL WIT IT. CUZ MY BF LOVES MY BODY SO MUCH AND I AM SO HAPPY HE DOES. AND IF PPL START TELLING YOU U LOOK LIKE A SKELETON THATS NOT GOOD U NEED TO DO SOMETHING FAST CUZ THAT WOULD PUT U DOWN EVEN MORE. UR BEING SPOILED THERE ARE SO MANY PPL DEPRESSED OVER THE WRONG REASONS IF UR FAMILY MEMBER DIES, OR UR ON DRUGS CUZ NO ONE CARES, OR U HAD BEEN RAPED MULTIPLE TIMES UR TEARS AND UR PAIN CAN'T EVER BE TAKEN AWAY NO MATTER HOW U COVER IT. BUT ANOREXIA U CAN WALK AWAY FROM AND LIFT UR HEAD UP HIGH AND BE HAPPY WAT YO MOMMA GAVE U. DO RIGHT. NOT STUPID THINGS. I USE TO BE BALIMIC HOW EVER U SPELL IT. BUT NOW I COULD STOP WATEVER I EAT THAT IS WRONG AND DO EAT THE THINGS THAT ARE RIGHT. TO HAVE THAT CONTROL IS COO, BUT HAVING ANOREXIA CONTROL U IS COMPLETELY STUPID LEAVES U CRAZY WITH A DISEASE THAT ALWAYZ EVENTUALLY LEAD TO DEATH. KEEP UR HEAD UP GRL UR BEAUTIFUL INSIDE AND OUT, THERES SOMEONE WAITING FOR YOU OUT THERE AND LUVZ U THE WAY U ARE, JUST GOT TO LOOK. |
by Sonya Marie
THIS POEM HURTS ME TO KNOW SO MANY SUFFER FROM THIS. I AM ON A DIET. BUT NOT ANOREXIA. I THINK IT'S NASTY TO SEE SOMEONE SO SAD, A SO SKINY. MY BF LUVZ MY BODY AND SO DO A LOT OF OTHER PPL AND I'M HAPPY NOT COMPLETELY SATISFIED BUT U GOT TO BE HAPPY WAT U GOT. AND ALL GIRLS CAN BE HAPPY AND NOT HAVE TO STARVE THEMSELVES. GRL I AM 140 N 5'6" AND THAT IS NOT CLOSE OF BEING THIN IT'S JUST NORMAL OR AVERAGE AND I'M COOL WIT IT. CUZ MY BF LOVES MY BODY SO MUCH AND I AM SO HAPPY HE DOES. AND IF PPL START TELLING YOU U LOOK LIKE A SKELETON THATS NOT GOOD U NEED TO DO SOMETHING FAST CUZ THAT WOULD PUT U DOWN EVEN MORE. UR BEING SPOILED THERE ARE SO MANY PPL DEPRESSED OVER THE WRONG REASONS IF UR FAMILY MEMBER DIES, OR UR ON DRUGS CUZ NO ONE CARES, OR U HAD BEEN RAPED MULTIPLE TIMES UR TEARS AND UR PAIN CAN'T EVER BE TAKEN AWAY NO MATTER HOW U COVER IT. BUT ANOREXIA U CAN WALK AWAY FROM AND LIFT UR HEAD UP HIGH AND BE HAPPY WAT YO MOMMA GAVE U. DO RIGHT. NOT STUPID THINGS. I USE TO BE BALIMIC HOW EVER U SPELL IT. BUT NOW I COULD STOP WATEVER I EAT THAT IS WRONG AND DO EAT THE THINGS THAT ARE RIGHT. TO HAVE THAT CONTROL IS COO, BUT HAVING ANOREXIA CONTROL U IS COMPLETELY STUPID LEAVES U CRAZY WITH A DISEASE THAT ALWAYZ EVENTUALLY LEAD TO DEATH. KEEP UR HEAD UP GRL UR BEAUTIFUL INSIDE AND OUT, THERES SOMEONE WAITING FOR YOU OUT THERE AND LUVZ U THE WAY U ARE, JUST GOT TO LOOK. |
by Chloe
Hey guys, |
by Candie
First of all, your poem is amazing, you have captured an anorexics mind very well, considering it isn't your self who is anorexic. It's a very sad poem, but at the same time very beautiful. |
by Lushed
i know exactly how you feel.....this realy....oh...its exactly me. you are an amazing poet, i hope you know this. |
by Marie
What is wrong with u girls. Thin is not always good. Didn't you know there's guys out there that like girls with some love handles!!!! |
by Zayda
OMG, this is such a wonderful poem, it makes me kinda sad, u no... im not anorexic, anyway... but it comes so straight from da heart it gets to me, this is a wonderful poem, Chloe, Congratulatios... if ur talkin bout u, mmm, i hope ethin turns out just fine... |
This was a really great poem |