Wow.. i can't explain the feeling i got when i read this poem. It flowed really well and i love the ending, it captures it all. Awesome poem, keep it up. :)

Aw *blushes* thankyou thats real gd 2 hear!! xx

You're an amazing writer. You capture the images so precisely. I love reading your work.

Thankyou... just thankyou, i dnt know who u are but that was sweet.

I don't usually like suicide poems but this one and your style has a twist to the genre that is unique -- I hate that word -- and refreshing because it is new.