i seriously thought that i was gonna cry. i could feel the tears welling up in my eyes. this is a GREAT poem! keep it up!

alwayz,
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wow u are such a talented writer..

That was very well written, and you have a good use of words. The only thing I can suggest is to decide to have a rhyme scheem, or not. Sometimes it rymed and sometimes it didn't. There was no deffinent pattern that I could see. So work on that, but otherwise it was great!!! Well done sweetie!

Much Love~
X.tasy