Scary

WOW..I LOVED IT!!! I'm glad to hear that your begining to get better...stay strong!!! your a great poet!!!
luv elizabeth.

Short and to the point...I like it good job

I loved your poem. It was short, but right to the point. A pain that strong is unbarable, but not impossible to overcome. Great Poem, and Very well described!! :-)

hey! i liked it. it was short but those were feelings i had once before. i, too, am slowly go through my healing process and its really hard to admit there is a problem, but i try my best everyday to look at the bright side of things and forget those days when i wanted to end it all. well thats enough rambling from me. i liked it and gave it a 5 because its true to so many ppl.
keep writing, id like to read more of your poems.
luv sarah

I wrote this poem almost 3 years ago. At a time when my whole life was crashing down around me. I felt pain that i thought only death could solve. This poem was my suicide note to the world. I have since started the healing process but i am not yet healed, not close to being healed. But i am healed enough to know that the solution to my problem wasnt and isnt death but the solution is myself. you cant win the war if you never start the fight. believe in yourself. you dont need a pill. you need a loving ear to listen to you, arms to hold you, and a the courage to admit you have a problem.