Wow! That is an awesome poem! I loved the structure, the rhyme and meter.
You did really well at capturing all the different....roles(?) no.... aspects (that's better) of the eyes... Great Work!

Wow. That's really good. I would never have thought of writing a poem about something like this. Very creative and very well written.

Keep writing gold, girl!

xox, PorteR

BTW, thanks for commenting on mine :P

Wow. That's really good. I would never have thought of writing a poem about something like this. Very creative and very well written.

Keep writing gold, girl!

xox, PorteR

BTW, thanks for commenting on mine :P