by jack Jul 20, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
I dreamed of you again last night in a dream that was so real. |
Sweet poem... I too dream a lot like that.. The rhymes were nice... The flow was good. Yeah as Ann said..it is a bit clumsy... It will be more pleasing to read if you make it four lined. |
Another great one with a really nice rhythm... it was kind os sing-songy! :o) I really enjoyed reading it. |