Very nice poem... but i think you made an error where it says"Thank you for each time told you told me no". i think that first 'told' needs to be taken out. Other than that it was great

wonderful poem< i have 4 daughters of my own, and I could see myself doing just those very things, daddy's have their own ways to showhow much they love their children, some don't know how to say it though, but the love is still their, just let someone hurt a man's little girl and you will see how fast he is to protect, you have such nice ways to show your respect, love and thanks to your daddy. keep on writing. Harry Bryant