by HOLLY ARMER Jul 20, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
He drains his glass and slowly looks around. |
Wow that was amazing...and very sad.. the emotion of the story was extemely powerful. nice job |
by Amanda Bee
This is just too terribly sad:( Wow! Excellent poem...*eyes starting to water*...Your poetry is magnificent. OK. *Taking a deep breath* I'm summoning the courage to go read part 2 now... |
by Forever29
Excellent! A very gripping story. 5! |
by BOB
Horiffying, I felt it, God I realy felt it. The saddest thing I read in a while. Somehow I realy feel youre expression. |
by Silent
Hi Holly |