Love

by HOLLY ARMER   Jul 20, 2004


Heartache never ending
it won't go away.
Haunted by our love
to this very day.

Love that wasn't enough
to keep you here.
Love that you professed
to calm my every fear.

Love you used to get
what you wanted from me.
Love that blinded me
so I couldn't see.

Love that deluded me
and made me high.
Love that was nothing more
than an illusive lie.

Love that I swear I will
never let myself feel,
because you never know
if it's fake or if it's real!!!

*Any vote/comments appreciated*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Ariana

    I don't think you should end with the exclamation marks as it doesn't fit in with the rest of the poem which is more sombre. Nice write though, I liked the repetition of 'love' and it didn't sound overused at all.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ariana

    I don't think you should end with the exclamation marks as it doesn't fit in with the rest of the poem which is more sombre. Nice write though, I liked the repetition of 'love' and it didn't sound overused at all.

  • 19 years ago

    by Forever29

    A very good poem, keep it up!

  • 20 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Whoa! I loved this piece great work your flow was excellent - thanks for taking the time to comment on my work also your time and thoughts are very appreciated :o)

  • 20 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Wow... this is REALLY good... I love the rhythm and flow and the words you use to get your message across.

    Great work!

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