WOW Awesome job. Keep it up.

--Sher

Wow... this is REALLY good... I love the rhythm and flow and the words you use to get your message across.

Great work!

Whoa! I loved this piece great work your flow was excellent - thanks for taking the time to comment on my work also your time and thoughts are very appreciated :o)

A very good poem, keep it up!

I don't think you should end with the exclamation marks as it doesn't fit in with the rest of the poem which is more sombre. Nice write though, I liked the repetition of 'love' and it didn't sound overused at all.

I don't think you should end with the exclamation marks as it doesn't fit in with the rest of the poem which is more sombre. Nice write though, I liked the repetition of 'love' and it didn't sound overused at all.