wow this is a really good poem, great work, i really like all your poems, your very talented, keep it up

thats a sad story, I really feel sorry, mmm... but thats a neat poem tho, keep up the good work :)

that is so sad, i am so sorry for your pain,. nevetheless great poem!

your really good. keep writing.

Awww that was so sad. The last line, wow it almost brought a tear to my eye, and i'll tell you now thats not easy to do. Great work.

awww, that's so sad!

Omg that is so sad good poem.