Cult

Whoops, I forgot to add something to my last comment.

Change "society" to "society/religion."

Is it just me, or do you agree with me that society is the worst thing that could've ever been created on this planet?

I am very glad that someone else writes about things like this.

It also brings great joy to me to know that someone else can see through humanity.

I like the poem, I like how blunt the message is, even though it is not directly stated.

Excellent work.

Borrow my profanity
to steal your innocence.

I loved those lines a lot. You could write a book just on those lines!

Good Writing,

//T.L.//

This poem left me with something to think about, you've said so much in so few words.

Hoorah, Cheers, and Well Done:

-paperdoll

liked this poem! short, powerful and intriguing.