Fantastic Hayley, and dont let those who couldn`t write a poem to save their miserable lives bring you down, you know and so does everyone else, that your poems are some of the best on here...thanx for sharing with me..Love always, Timothy r

hey hayley. tell your sister i think this is a great poem!!! after writting a couple and listening to peoples imputs she is going to be a great writer just like her older sister!!!!!!!! this poem really touches the soul and teaches a valuable lesson. keep up the good writting!!!! good luck!!! Luv Always ~*~MANDA~*~

Such a tragic event... heart-wrenching for sure. You two did an awesome job telling this story which I know is true somewhere even if not in your lives. I know that I could tell a very similar tale.

Keep up the good work...both of you.