Comments : Motion

  • 19 years ago

    by loosing grip

    i no exactly wat u r talkin bout, i do it 2, and once u go deep the first time theres no way of it bein any other way...i write bout that a lot... keep ur head up!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Shadowed_Thoughts

    great poem

  • 19 years ago

    by f0rSaKeN AngeL

    Wow. I can really relate to that because I used to do it to but not anymore. Keep up the good work :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    hmm its a sad poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    Nice write. I didn't think the ending really fit aswell as the rest of the lines did - but apart from that this was very good.