by loosing grip
i no exactly wat u r talkin bout, i do it 2, and once u go deep the first time theres no way of it bein any other way...i write bout that a lot... keep ur head up!!! |
great poem |
Wow. I can really relate to that because I used to do it to but not anymore. Keep up the good work :) |
by Andrea
hmm its a sad poem. |
by Ariana
Nice write. I didn't think the ending really fit aswell as the rest of the lines did - but apart from that this was very good. |