That was awesome! It almost made me cry because it comes so close to explaining my situation.

Great work Dainelle! Keep it up
Love Amy xoxo

I was blown away. Such emotion, such words, this is truly a poem for the saddened. Thank you. It was incredible.

Wow, Danielle, that was one great poem!

I tihnk that poem is beautifull, ur choice of words is really really good!!

Oh My Gosh! Amazing Poem! I Absolutly Loved It! You Are Such A Great Writer And I Enjoy Reading Your Poems! Magnificiantly Written And Great Job! Keep It Up.

Hay....izz dashin!

WOW..that was soo AMAZING!!!..i dont even know what else to say..im speecheless.

How can you not,
they are so deafening
Pleading to be heard
yet hushed, they will remain.

I absolutely love that stanza. I know how it feels to think you're screaming so loudly, and crying so hard ... and still not being heard. (I don't know if that was your message, but that's what I got.)