I admit.. I gave this one a 5. I'm more into poems that rhym.. but I really like this one. I's really amazing how the years can change something you thought was so strong. How one stupid little thing can take it all away. I really enjoyed reading this... good job again.

Ok I haven't read any of maries stuff for awile. I haven't even been to this site for sometime.

TO ALL OF YOU
Who cares if they don't rhym. She is not some stupid rapper. These poems are a expression of how she feels not some pose on trying to impress someone. They are all done wonderfuly.
M&M, 2pac, Dr Dre, and that chingy dork can eat there rhyms choke and die.
MARIE IS DOING WHAT SHE DOES AND DOING A RAWKIN JOB