Comments : Him and him

  • 20 years ago

    by GirlieLovexx

    u are really good in the use of ur words!!!!!

    abby xxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by It Itty

    Started out beautiful (and ended that way too, really) just didn't like that part about your boyfriend being God...but oh well, it's your poem...and it really was beautifully written.