by Rachel Ellison Jul 22, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
He’s a swollen belly on a starving child, |
Wow. Great discription. So true. So sad. But gotta admit its good writing. Keep up the good work. |
Wow, that was amazing. It just . . . I can't say what about it exactly, but that poem really touched me somehow. Great job with it, 5/5. |
by codey
i really like this poem although shorter than others i have read i felt that yours touched me more than any others :D take care |
by Josie
Very cool, I like ur poem it speaks the truth. |
by HOLLY ARMER
That was brilliant! I truly loved it! Really makes you think!! |