I LOVE IT!!! thats all i can say! :-)! xXx

That was brilliant! I truly loved it! Really makes you think!!

Very cool, I like ur poem it speaks the truth.

i really like this poem although shorter than others i have read i felt that yours touched me more than any others :D take care
-LuV 4RoM mE-

Wow, that was amazing. It just . . . I can't say what about it exactly, but that poem really touched me somehow. Great job with it, 5/5.

-Mikochan

Wow. Great discription. So true. So sad. But gotta admit its good writing. Keep up the good work.