by NoPatience Jul 22, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I remember the Smile |
Good flow and rhythm... loved this one just like all the other ones ive read of urs... keep it up, ur very talented |
by Jenni Marie
I enjoyed this, it was really sweet yet sad, and filled with emotion. |
by Just Lucy
That is so sad and i understand that completely! alot of people will know exactly where your coming from with this, good work hun 5/5 from me |
5/5 you have great talent, the poem flowed really well and the story was clear....your poem will now be in my memory.... :P keep up the good work! |
by BlueDreams
Beautiful penned! simply within every stanza yet flowed with beautiful emotions! marvellous! |