Memory

by NoPatience   Jul 22, 2004


I remember the Smile
You'd have on your Face
When I'd do something Stupid
And feel out of place

I remember all the nights
We spent reminicing
About both of our pasts
And what we were missing

I remember how I felt
When you held me in bed
And I remember each and every
Word that you said

I remember when "I love You"
Wasn't used as just a phrase
I remember how we argued
And then got over the phase

I remember the taste
Of the saline in your tears
When we'd speak of our pasts
and all our endless fears

I remember how it felt
When you held me in your arms
And feeling as though,
You could do me no harm

I remember how we planned
On always being one
And Never missing a moment
Because our lives had just begun

I remember the love
I once knew as gold
That has all turned to rust
As you let the thruth unfold

I remember when you loved me
but now I clearly see
that it's all in the past
I'm just a memory

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  • Good flow and rhythm... loved this one just like all the other ones ive read of urs... keep it up, ur very talented

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I enjoyed this, it was really sweet yet sad, and filled with emotion.
    I liked the rhyme scene and flow and I enjoyed the imagery and wording. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    That is so sad and i understand that completely! alot of people will know exactly where your coming from with this, good work hun 5/5 from me

    xoxo Lucy

  • 18 years ago

    by broken reflection

    5/5 you have great talent, the poem flowed really well and the story was clear....your poem will now be in my memory.... :P keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Beautiful penned! simply within every stanza yet flowed with beautiful emotions! marvellous!