Beautiful, it had a nice flow to it. Strong emotions too. Great job.

yeah I would say that was ironic.... at least you found out that she was wrong for you and your still not wondering.... Im very happy for you.. I hope you have a very nice life... and you get everything that you deserve

Hey Brandon that was another exellent poem, I love your seqeuncing and the way you make anything rhyme. I wish I could write as well as you. Well Dont and Keep up the marvellous work!

xxoo, alysse

Well written poem. I like the way, how you pictured a confused mind turned to be a determined mind. You are such a gifted poet. The best ever i have seen in this site. Love, Trincy.

To Alex,
Normally I don't like getting into other ppls business, but this time I just can't help myself..You are an immature, jerk. His poems are beautiful and written with immense passion.. I don't see you having any poems on here.Make sure you know what the hell it is your talking about before you open your mouth...If you think his poems suck, then you must not know what poetry truly is , so best to shut up before you get caught up in something you know nothing about.. Take Care Brandon, and Grow up Alex

This is a really good poem. I love how you wrote it and your choice of words. Great job! Keep writing!

~Grace

Thank you all for your comments. Honestly, I didn't think this one was that great... Special thanks to Trincy, you're comment made my day. You're a great writer and I look up to you as a fellow poet.

Keith: Go for it.

Alex: Not exactly what I call "constructive criticism"... (said in Adam Sandler voice from The Waterboy), but to each his own, lol.

Thanks again,
Brandon

omg that was so good!!

Absolutely beautiful! It's hard when the one you want doesn't want you.

Excellent poem!

wow, thats all i can say is wow. i love it. i feel the exact same way right now and it sux. i know. keep up the good work. xoxo <3 Heather.

omg! that is such a great poem!!!!! keep it up!

I am so sorry to tell you this. But this poem has been stolen. And he's even claiming HE wrote it. I suggest you take a look. http://www.trinipulse.com/community/member_tp.asp?id=lanos145&pageNumber=5