Beautiful, your words are powerful. Your poems fit together so well. Wow, I only wish that my poems could compare. Wonderful job, keep it up

that really touched my heart... I've lost so many people in my life...and I've been in that "not crying" state before...you translated the emotions of this incident into words beautifully...

Keep up the great work!

~Ann

Wow...that was breath-taking! Such emotion and beautiful words!! Outstanding...you are very gifted!!!

Wow, just like all the others...AWESOME!!!!! You really have a talent here babe, don't ever let it get away from you. You can take things that are such tragedies and turn them into beautiful master pieces!

Always
Sher

wow that was amazing. so touching and powerful! i was almost in tears. this is one of the best poems ive ever read! keep it up! xoxo
love Amy

Hayley...WOWWWW...that was powerful..loved it, well said..hope it's 'just a poem'..take care, Michelle :)

That has to be one of the most upsetting pieces I've ever read. I know how hard it is to lose someone so close to you; words to describe the pain just don't exist. I'm so sorry for your loss.

You did a great job conveying your emotions in this poem. It’s truly one of your best!

OMG hayley that was so beautiful, it makes me admire you, your strength, your courage, your faith. I'm so sorry that you and David had to go through that, but remember just coz the person you love isn't here with you know dosn;t mean you wont be with them later. You have absolutely amazing talent, thats one of the best poems I have ever read and it brought me close to tears. Keep your head high and have faith, its what david would want u to do

xxoo,
alysse

great, i can't say much, i'm in total silence... i loved it...you are very talented...5 all the way.

This poem was amazing, i even started to cry and i still am as i write this! who ever wrote this is an AMAZING writer and obviously a very strong and BEAUTIFUL person! this really touched me!

im in tears, and i really dont know wut to say..... im really sorry i guess is what i should say? if i were u i dont know what id do.....this is an amazing poem......i dont know if i couldve handled that......u are obviously a really strong person

This poem was amazing, is it true? if so, i am terribly sorry. keep writing, your inspiring me to go write right now! haha please, your an amazing poet, look at some of my poems and see if you can give me any "constructive critisism" so that i can be just as good as you someday!!

I really cannot add to what every one else has said Hayley, but this was an extraordinary poem, you are so great at writitng these pieces, take care and have a good life my girl...Love always, Tim

I loved it