Stealth sorrows

by Dany   Jul 23, 2004


I’m full of pain,
Crying, killing…
I’m full of confusion,
Bleeding, caught…

I’m a chorus,
The one we hate,
I’m a dream,
Even not a little thought...

What? Me?
I’m gone
And lost,
Next to your dreams...

I’m there,
I’m hurt,
Without even asking you,
To make me exist...

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    by Gemma Sinead Hayward

    Very...........melodramatic. Don;t worry - i mean that in a good way. Its sinister too. Just what i like!

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