I THINK IT REALLY DON'T RYME BUT POETRY IS BEAUTIFUL EITHER WAY. IT SHOWS SO MUCH EMOTION THAT IS WHY I GAVE IT A 5.0 SO KEEP UP WAT U GOT AND WRITE SOME MORE SO I COULD SEE THM. PEACE OUT!

WOW THAT WAS REALLY GOOD. I WAS READING SOME OF THE OTHER POEMS AND I WAS WONDERING IF YOU WOULD CHECK OUT THIS POEM. I HAVE THIS GIRL UNDER MY FAVS. SHE IS A VERY GOOD POET AND I WANTED TO SEE IF YOU THOUGHT SO TOO.

HERE ARE HER POEMS:

True fate
Its our Father's house
Forgotten

I THOUGHT THEY WERE REALLY GOOD. I KNOW IT WOULD MEAN SO MUCH TO HER IF YOU WENT TO CHECK THEM OUT. HER NAME IS DANIELLE.

THANKS.
NIKKI

Very...........melodramatic. Don;t worry - i mean that in a good way. Its sinister too. Just what i like!