another good one!! I really felt that i dont know why..I think its cute you got it of a jazz song!! you never cease to be a great writer!! i wish i had the talent like you in ways to write about any little thing! Good job!!! well worth another 5~!

Personally i dont think that such words are to be taken as lightly to be refered to as cute, but either way good poem it worked very well. Good expression of emotion aswell

Thanks for voting and commenting everyone!