Five Words

by SammiBABY   Jul 23, 2004


I’m losing grip,
I’m slipping away,
I’ve lost control,
What more can I say?
I’m walking in the shadows
I feel left behind
I really can’t cope
With my guilty mind.
I’m sinking too deep
I’m floating to sea,
I’m locked from the truth
And you can’t help me.
My mind’s ripped apart
My soul is on fire
It started with five words:
You have to quit choir.

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  • 20 years ago

    by Robyn Park

    I agree with Barb, but I can see where Meena is coming from. The ending wasn't what I expected it to be, but it was wonderfully written. Kudos

  • 20 years ago

    by SammiBABY

    It's not really funny not 4 me anyway.
    it's more like pain and suffering than funny...

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