THIS POEM U CAN EASILY TELL U PUT A LOT OF EFFORT FOR EACH LINE TO SOUND GOOD AND SHOW OF HOW MUCH UR WORDS NEED TO BE LET OUT. I WILL LOOK UP UR NAME AND RATE UR POEMS U TRY TO DO THE SAME. MY NAME IS SONYA. BYE

this was a really good one
i can totally relate to it. i feel exactlly the same
ur so awesome
nevder stop writing ok?
love Sammi

I really liked this one because i can relate to it so much and im sure lots of others can as well. Keep the great work up.