nikki, some things you should keep tp yourself. i knew it wasnt the greatest poem but i worte it when i had just told my friend that i didn't love him the way he loved me and for you to say that to me was so harsh. in future i'd appreciate it if you kept those sorts of opinions to yourself. Thanks to everyone else who has commented....i really appreciate it. Luv Nicole =)

i loved the way u didnt try and follow the 'rules' of poetry, it made that poem very enjoyable.......and i agree, poems have no rules really, theyre just a great way to express yourself