ya.. thanks a lot for the comments!!

i am sorry but it was not that funny that sounded more like a lost love poem.....BUT I DO LOVE THE POEM!!!!!!!

ha ha sry about that... wasn't sure which catagory to put this one in!! lolz please forgive, hee hee.. thanks for the comments, i don't mind the critisim... helps me write better!

hey~ then again... i think it's supposed to be funny, i was meaning it to lighten up the subject of dumb ass guys who do stupid things... like getting high and drunk and stuff... it wasn't like hysterical i kno... but it was about a love that never really began... so it couldn't be in lost love?? so once again i wasn't sure where it belonged to!

i liked it. i thought it was awesome!

ty ty!! lol, i liked writing it... at the time i was mad at a particular guy, and his group of friends.. i'm not mad anymore... I wrote it cuz i wasn't used to hanging out with dumb ass guys that do stupid shit... ha ha kinda am now cuz half of them became my friends! but i let them all kno, if they ever did any of that crap around me... it would be the end of our friendship and stuff! lol

thanks!!

thanks... and sry you thought it was retarded?? lol ok well... w/e

ok thanks for the comments!

kick ass poem girl! know exactly how ya feel sum lads are so pafectic! keep it up! nikki xXx

thanks for the comments... even if you hated it... thanks for your comments i guess, lol. Sorry if anyone hates it... I didn't purposly make it to like... piss anyone off LMAO

hey! this is an awesome poem! i likes!!!! i jus wanted to say thanks for commenting and do the same for you!! ne_ways i gave you a 5!! keep it up!

ty so much!! i really appretiate it Jennifer

Amen Freddy

This poem should have a much higher rating than it has.
this is what most boys are like. they think they are the "sh!t" but they arent.
this poem was fun to read and i enjoyed how much it implied that he was "not hot"
5/5

Wow this person really did tick you off haha, great poem again everything was flowing and rhyming nicely 5/5