BreathFull

by LuAnne   Jul 27, 2004


Breath full

Slow is the moment as it is passed,
Time forever, seems so vast.
Taking a gentle gasp for air,
As you are confused by each stare.
Your lost, your confused,
As the mind is bemused.
What can you do,
Beside ponder and evaluate through your own view.
As your let go,
The hard feelings seem to quickly flow.
You don’t want them to stay,
But what will life be with them gone away?
You are taking the chance, but not a lost cause.
As you walk away, you take a glance and pause.
Take on more look at a life you left behind,
But you know a new one is there to find.

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  • 20 years ago

    by LuAnne

    ThAnks So much For your CommEntS thEy mEan A tOn

  • 20 years ago

    by Jessica

    your poem is really good. i really do like it alot. i like this (As you walk away, you take a glance and pause.
    Take on more look at a life you left behind, But you know a new one is there to find.) that is cool as hell.