I have to say that this is a very good poem! as im reading it, i canget a crear image in my mind of what you're saying..thats awsome! keep it ip!

OKAY WOW!!!! I dont know what to say....cuz its so amazing...i know i always say that about your poems..but its true..your poems really touch me and I can relate so well!!! THis is very very awesoem!