A Very touching poem it's very beautifull u can really tell it comes from the heart
keep on writing
Take Care
Jo

wow... almost brang tears to my eyes... really well written! I'm sorry for all that happend! Hey~ If you ever wanna talk and u got aim... my sn is missmollyqt, i kno that u prob don't wanna but... hey if u ever need someone to talk to... then ya! well this is such a good poem! It's great!

wow... salute... such a ver good poem... def a 5.... liked it... the flow and everything... =)
hope u can pass by mine =) and if u have time vote and comment too =) much appreciated...

if u can find time...
*last goodbye #1
*in loving memory #2
* the room #3

titles for my poem ... they need critics =) hehe thanx for sharing this poem... much love

excellent poem, keep up the good work.Long but good.

No wonder you have such a high rating, thi poem is fantastic and so well written. You hae expressed your self so well!

i absolutly love this poem you did a awesome job of explaining how you feel, its sad but it couldnt be better, i love it

I feel ur pain cause i am havin the same feelings ur havin right now...i really enjoyed ur poem and it hit me because i know ur feelings on it and i know the pain ur goin through..and i wish i could help u but i can't even help myself:(

Dude, i totally understand. I love this guy yet im only 14 and still .. he doesnt want to try. You can talk to me about what happened if you want. Email me? xlostxmyxselfx@hotmail.com or IM me on aim at xlostxmyxselfx or xixlovexnakitax

Kellie

that was a really awesome and heartfelt poem. Keep wiring you're really good

omg!! that was the best poem ive ever read and i can totallly realate and i'm 13 too..email me...pinkpanther5128@yahoo.com

OMG, I totally know how you feel!!! That is EXACTLY how i feel!!!!!! That was an awsome poem, by the way!! If you eva want to talk, just PM me!!

luv kahlia

hold in there!! he will be back or u WILL find someone new

very great poem!

hey!! OMG!! That is an awesome poem!!! My friend is going thru this rite now and from wut she has told me it all relates sooo well!!! Keep up the gud work!!

Much love

omg!!! this is the best poem i ever read!!! great job :D

Well i have to say that you have done very well. You have put part of yourself into words that so many people can feel. You arent alone. Many people feel the pain of love lost. Everything youve written in that poem i have said myself.

As the scars set and the scabs fade the blade returns to its work.

thats and awsome poem..i know how you feel...i gave it a 5..very nice poem

hey gurl!! that was an awesome poem!! i really liked it!! i know exactly how you feel! you should read my poem: my everything and without you...because there are kind of similar to your poem!! well good job!! :)

Ohh, God; this poem is really good, You know, I know how you feel (believe it or not) and I wish I could express myself as you do, honey, remember your love for what it left you, embrace good memories, would you? xoxox You'll be alright...

Ok, I've read all your poems, you're a great writer, hun, I've actually added you to my favorites... Hun, I wish I was as brave as you... You're an example of what a girl should be, you know? stand out for her beliefs... Hun, keep up your good work... Ohh, I've be flattered if u got the chance to read my poems... If I get lucky one day I'll write as well as you do, lol... thumbs up*