Everyone is saying they how now u feel, but i don't i just hope your ok and have the support you need, i'd hate myself if my boyfrend ever left me, so don't do anyting drastique, he obviously wasn't the right one, loved your poem too!

This was a very sad poem. But don't be so closed-minded. There's someone out there for everyone, but if you keep focusing on the past, you won't find him. Every day is a gift, and you do matter. You can make a difference in this world. Just try. Don't lose hope. keep your head up, and pray. good luck ~dandy~

I'm sorry that he left. Your story served as a great inspiration for this wonderful poem.

wow that was so amazing! i could totally tell that was a big deal 2 u with the emotion you put into it. it was a beautiful poem.

Thats the best poem ive read so far. that is sooooo true. u got my vote

"Don't forget to love yourself."
-Soren Kierkegaard

wow...... ur not the only one who cuts themself cause there sad or depressed. my life sucks. i hate it. the only person i can turn to is my best friend. shes just like my sister. when i cant talk to her thats when my knife is my bestfriend

Pointless to write a comment. I highly dought you'll read this but hey I'll write something anyways. This was a well written poem, but i must say feeling like death can grant you freedom from the pain isn't the way to go when it's because of a man. (a boy) You will always remember your first love. And nothing can change that. So keep your life in your hands and keep on writing! Your great at it....

A job well done.

Wow, that was just a really great poem. I feel like I am going through the same thing. I knew a guy name Tommy, it's like he altered my universe. He made me feel important, like I stood above all else. He was my everything. And now, since I have moved, all we can do is but exchange a few words through msn and email. I used to feel like I couldn't live without him, and now that I have to, I cry every night. I cry over so many things, my life is not the best. But for him? I cry for him above all else. No matter how I feel, things will never get better. I have told him I will never love anyone else, as much as I love him. I know he feels the same, and it hurts even more knowing that. No one understands me, in the way that he did, and now that he is gone, I have no one to turn to, yet no one seems to understand why I always act sad, on accident, or why I can never really seem to say anything nice or possitive. But one way or another, I will return to him.

Awww..Wheni read that it was like i was looking through your eyes...and saw everything that you wrote.It was soo real.And cute. I have to admite.. im sumthing like you. I do cut myself. and my life was a dark whole until i ment brandon. Anyway... It was reallly cute. and it touched me soo.bye hun

OMG IM GOING THROUGH THE SAME THING AT THIS VERY MOMENT I JUST BROKE UP WITH MY BF CAUSE OF THE DISTANCE AND HE WAS THE ONLY THING KEEPIN ME ALIVE SO NOW I DUNNO..........

OMG!......amazing, simply amazing

powerful poem i like it allot. im sorry that love sux. i know how you feel

The pain and the suffering are a hard thing to get through, but try and be strong, just get through this time, there will always be people who love you- keep up the good work with the poems

Mark.

It may seem like he was the only thing that you were living for but your obviously still alive for some reason and ovbiously its not because of him

this poem actually mad emy heart sink...bc im going through this too...and..you know i may be young but if ai love this guy i love him and i love this poem....so good luck in the future hun...

there are no words to describe how good this poem is so dont feel daft letting your feelings show love
i felt just the same way about 6 months ago but ive turned my life around because everytime i feel sad i write another poem

wow!! great poem, i love it probably since i can realate to it this comment is probably really late but all well keep it up cant wait to read more and i hope yout lyfe will get better <3-krystal

Hey Chloe. Just wanted to say that this poem is brilliant. And u might not believe it but Iknow wat ur going through. I lost a boyfriend when I was younger too, and I thought my life was over. But keep your head held high hun, your a brilliant poem writer and it brougt a year to my eyes.