I know my comment is a bit late, but i was reading all of the past competion poems, and you're's was AMAZING. The way you explained what you're going through...it really touched me. I was in a similar situation: I loved him and we broke up and i felt everything was worthless. Well, compared to all the other comments, this may be nothing, but i really hope you got through the rain hun. Great work, you're an inspiration.
Gurdy x

This poem was so awesome and touching! I understand what you are going through, but cutting yourself doesn't help anything. I wish you the best. And keep writing, you are very talented!

I know how you feel Ive been left broken hearted so many times I dont trust anyone anymore I wont even get close to a guy, because your right love does end with a broken heart i dont think i have much of a heart left. Love always Heather

Amber, you are mentally insane. You said that you wrote this when you were 14...Well, for your information, a 14 year old is not that much more mature than a 13 year old. Your poems are crap, and therefore you are stealing mine. I know you just want me to leave, but guess what? I'm staying. And by the way, have you ever heard of copyright? It is illegal to steal other peoples work, meaning, you did something illegal. I have reported this. And like I said, give me your sister's and your mum's phone numbers, and I will call them and ask for proof. I wrote this poem, so quit throwing that sh(i)t in my face.

that's really really good mabey u can compliment on my poems sometime there not as good as this but oh well keep up the good work

that was really good.. sounds like my old boyfriend.!~ He wantedme back after i had someone new... it hurts but now i found someone new that it ten timez betta n i've been with him for about 7-8 months now and it's going really smooth... even with him havin a baby on da way.~ it's all good gurly.. you'll find someone new... my mom tellz me that i deserve better then what i have now n stuff and she hates the guy i'm with now so she movedme to seattle to stay away from him... just back for x-mas then i'm going back ... but i love my boyfriend and i can never give up on loving him.. stay strong and keep looking cause the next one that comes along will be worth all the wait.*

SpEeChLeSs, i dont really know how u feel, but remember, i'll be there if u need to talk.
later

Omg this was so sad but yet so very good to deffinatly mad it on my favorites list :) i can relate to this so well

really good i loved it
~ROCK ON~

i love this poem it is like so totally awsome

i love this poem it is like so totally awsome

Same here. My ex was my everything to me and he was my life and when u have no life then how can u live?!..................................:(

oh my!..this is the way i feel about a boy i love with all my heart and i know that i cant get him back its such an awesome poem!

thats sad:'(

I feel the same way.It brought a tear to my eyes.My boyfriend and i can really relate to this poem.5/5 keep up the good work.

Its not always easy to keep my attention, but you managed to do it with flying colors. An extraordinary work of art.

Hades

Its not always easy to keep my attention, but you managed to do it with flying colors. An extraordinary work of art.

Hades

5/5 great poem

This poem tears to my eyes,this is excaly how my ex does me an dhow i feel about him5/5 keep up the good work.

Oh my gosh this is so well written and you expressed your feelings so well, thanks so much for writing it, todya my boyfriend got caught cheating on me, so i totally understand what your going threw!
anyways good job! 5/5
take care
holly