Omg i can relate to EVERY word in this poem, i truely love it! The same thing has happened to me...incredible poem, good job keep it up ur a greta poet, hope ur okay

Alot of people can relate to this poem! good job at writing this.

I hope things are well with you. "In time things will get better."

-Josiah

Good poem

Great poem and i thought it was brilliant. Good job.

OMG. this is the best poem i have ever read! i can relate to it 100 percent! you should really get this published. anyone who has had there heart broken can relate to this. he was my everything too. we was never technically mine but i loved him more then i have ever loved anything. and now i have to see him everyday with a smile on his face. this poems is amazing!. PUBLISH IT!

That was soo good, that whole thing applies to my life right now. i give it a 5

That was amazing and i know how you feel

Wow dat was a reawy great poem! i feel da same way. my love left me n im so lost... he was my evryting n he left me 4 her...

I kno how u feel..gr8 job wow so much emotion!

Sooo. this is absolutley wonderful.
i had a bestfriend; and highschool changed us soo much. he dropped me because i fell in love with him.

and in this poem..
ya know.. to everylove story there shouln't have to be an ending..
because true love never dies*
just think about it.

katelyn♥

I really liked this one...it hit a soft spot and relates to me in a way that i thought only my writing would its really good!

Mel

Wow... I understand so much how you feel.. i can relate to that more then any poem I've ever read I'm going through the EXACT same thing right now. and i keep asking myself what i need to do to go on.. but i can't seem to find the answer. if i just knew there was some kind of hope for me and him.. but but i just don't know. i just don't know anything anymore and he's so unwilling to try even though he still has feelings

This is a reallly reeallllyy good poem
KEEP IT UP!

Omg i loved it...my bf broke up with me last night and your poem helped me so much here is my 5 u r great love it soo much!

Wow Everything you mentioned in this poem happened to me. I'm back to cutting again and I know it's a bad thing to do but it's the only thing to take away my pain now days. Anyways this poem was awesome you did a wonderful job. I hope you continue writing new poems so I can read some more because I enjoy reading your poems. If you ever need to talk just let me know. Thank You Buh-bye
5/5

I can totally relate to this entire poem...

Extremely well written.
i love it.

GOD THAT WAS A BEAUTIFUL POEM THERE....I GIVE IT A 10 NOT A 5...
I USE TO BE A CUTTER ALSO...BUT NOW I AM OLDER AND A LITTLE BIT WISER..NOW I JUST WERE BURN MY SELF WITH LIT CIGARS OR CIGARETTES..I AM NOT SAYING THAT IT'S BETTER AT ALL...AND NOTING WILL TAKE AWAY THE HEARTACHE AS INFLICTING OAIN ON YOURSELF...I KNOW BELIEVE ME...BUT ONE THING THAT YOU NEED TO RELIZE IS THAT YOU HAVE A WAY WITH WORDS...AND SOME DAY YOU AGAIN WILL FIND A TRUE LOVE...ONCE AGAIN BEAUTIFUL POEM THANK YOU..

Excellent poem, i really enjoyed it good work 5/5.

PS. plz comment and rate on my poems

That poem pretty much just made me cry. I'm going through that right now.. & everything you just said, is true. keep it up.