Comments : He was my everything

  • 17 years ago

    by Charlotte

    I know exactly how u feel cos i feel exactly the same right now and its horrible. it's a great poem. if you would like a chat thn dnt b afraid to message me =)

    luv char xXx

  • 17 years ago

    by Ema

    U prbly got enough 'i canh help you' type/advice...and u may not want to hear any more...but i am going through what u are...every line inthat poem is a reflection of my life...i wish i could find a way to make him love me again, but it seems impossible..right now i continue to love him ...and i think that he loves me too...but, idk...at times i just want to die because it feels like he doesnt even care about me..when the whole time we were together he told me he woulf never leave me or hurt me....

    life sucks...

    ema

  • 17 years ago

    by jazmin

    Hey dont worry u are not alone because im going through the same.... no one in my house seems to care and the only person that showed me they did was my ex my love... who ever said u cant love in young years was wrong cause im deeply inlove.... i lost him and im scared ill never get him back... i really understand wat ur going throgh and yes it hurts alot... keep hanging in there and hopefully u will find someone else who will love u a million more times than that other guy... i hope i do find that guy.... love ur poem it really got to me...5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Catie

    I just have got to say, this is one of the greatest poems i have ever read, and i can relate to it so well...i'm going through the same thing right now...but yea..it's really a great poem 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    It brought tears in my eyes. Such a sad poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Veamm

    Sad story..well you did a good work..keep it up..5/5 for it..well if you have a time try to see my piece too..

  • 17 years ago

    by Annie Butterfly

    All I can say is stay strong darl, smile even if it hurts on the inside. My bf broke up with me for the last time and I feel very similar to yourslef. Hold on to your friends because they are the ones who will get you through and remember there is always gunna be someone else no matter wat hun. Always keep that in the back of your mind.

  • 17 years ago

    by liz

    I completley relate 2 u in this poem! I have lost d only person who gave me any hope! He stopped me from killing myself but now that he is gone life seems pointless again! But great write it flowed very well u have a great talent

  • 17 years ago

    by NearlyCrazy6

    I just have to say, that this poem is everything that i have been feeling. It is like if i wouldve written it myself. I am absolutely in love with this poem! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by VALERIE

    You wrote an amazing poem i love it so much!!

  • 16 years ago

    by XUrXLossXNotXMineX

    I know how u feel i went through this a little over a year ago with a guy id liked since i was 8 and i didnt cut before hand but after he left i started and it went on for a while and i couldnt stop by myself. the pain hurts more than people think and i know u know this 2 alot of people just told me 2 find someone new but i couldnt even do that for a long time it takes a long time 2 get over people u love and sooner or later i hope u will find someone 2 treat u right and alot better because no one deserves the pain of heartbreak but it happens 2 the best of us. take care hun.

  • 16 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    This is an amazing poem. i couldnt take my eyes off the screen when i was readding it. 5/5

    xo kisses xo

  • 16 years ago

    by BrokenHearted

    Very nice, very powerful, great job

  • 16 years ago

    by Fallen Star

    Omg girl. this sounds EXACTLY like me. awesome job..talk to me sometime if you want.

  • 16 years ago

    by LaUrEn

    A total amazing poem..
    i can totally relate. i am going through the same thing right now with this guy.
    i hope everything works out for you and him.

  • 15 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    WOW!
    This Poem was so powerful and just amazing; you can feel the emotion you are going through.
    Very much made me cry.
    Well Done! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by BrOkeN HeArt Can kill

    Wow . i think ive felt the same . i actually felt my heart breaking =\
    great work tho ..

  • 14 years ago

    by BrOkeN HeArt Can kill

    Ii lovee this part.

    "Maybe to you,
    it wasn't a big thing,
    but remember this,
    you were my everything."

    ihts muh away message :]

  • 13 years ago

    by Areeba

    Speechless is what I am right now....amazing work....loved it so much...keep it up

  • 13 years ago

    by hayley

    This poem is amazing. i love it. it touched me