Comments : He was my everything

  • 12 years ago

    by sofiey

    Love hurts....been thr and still tryng to b fine sayn im okey evn thu im not....,haizt

  • 12 years ago

    by sofiey

    Love hurts....been thr and still tryng to b fine sayn im okey evn thu im not....,haizt

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Absolutely beautiful and i can relate. love hurts and at times we don't understand why and what happened. but there is a reason for everything. i am older been there done it but pain becomes manageable in time. the truth is it was not our doing its them all we did was love them

  • 12 years ago

    by Faith Harbaugh

    LOVE IT!

  • 12 years ago

    by Faith Harbaugh

    LOVE IT! reminds me of my ex boyfriend and me. We just split yesterday and we only technically dated about a week but he was my best friend so now i lost his love and friendship. </3

  • 12 years ago

    by Guinevere

    This is so beautiful!
    It is like you have written exactly how I'm feeling :(
    Especially in that line where it says something like
    "I know to you, it may not have been a big thing"
    " but to me, you were my everything"
    (exactly how I feel) :( :(
    He was Unique, and i'll never see him again:(
    Well written :)

  • Wow this is really sad poem, although very simple but it is very very effective.

    love kills slowly......

  • 12 years ago

    by radio host

    I would love for you to read your poem on my radio show by phone. If interested email me, thanks !

  • 12 years ago

    by Blaire

    Its so amazing....it makes so much sense!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by John Dlyan Boone BABY

    It is a beauty good job well done

  • 12 years ago

    by Ali

    I am going exactly through the same thing my wife just walked out on me from 2 and a half years of marriage and a 6 year old love before that. its been 8 months since she has gone and have not contacted me since. I am crying since that day and hoping she comes back. Believe me when you say it may not sound like i big deal i know it does and what it feels.

    May God Bless you

  • 12 years ago

    by everbloom789

    This is in my eyes the perfect poem you are such a good writter to expres your feelings in such a perfect way can't wait to read more!
    Everbloom789 Xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    I know you've probably heard this about a million zillion times from people, but THAT WAS THE MOST BREATH TAkING POEM I HAVE EVER FALLEN IN LOVE WITH, THAT MOVES IS A LIKE A BLACK BOX WRAPPED UP IN THE FINEST PAPER, THAT WAS A POEM ONLY ONE OF THE MOST TALENTED POETRY WRITERS COULD EVER MASTER, THAT WAS INSPIRING, SOUL OPENER, THAT TOUCHED MY HEART SO DEARLY, YOUR WORDS ARE AMAZING, NO WORDS CAN EVEN START TO DESCRIBE HOW MUCH I LOVEDDDDD THAT! OMGoodness magnficent, favorite

  • 12 years ago

    by Gin

    Ik the same thing happend to me too.

  • 12 years ago

    by Brooklynn

    Your words describe how i feel. your words are im sure what alot of people feel but dont know how to say. i love it<3

  • 12 years ago

    by kevinia

    That was very touching i love it ...

  • 12 years ago

    by Hadassah grey

    Sad..real sad.but never let another human make u unhappy.remembers God loves u more..more than u can ever imagine.u'll find a good man..one that will stay till d end.be strong.

  • 12 years ago

    by Maria Chatziilia

    I can totally relate to this poem. Good job :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Amber

    I love this its great and i feel the same way at times

  • 12 years ago

    by Chloe DeWitt

    This is how i feel. . i cry everynight and i just can't stop the tears. . it hurts to breathe the air we used to share, and even though he said friends to me, i just didn't see the point. . all i want in life is him. .if i cn't have that, then why go on living? it wouldn't hurt anybody around me, but i just can't leave him. . :'( cuz if i do, i'll be all alone, even in my own hell