excellent poem, greta imagery, well done!

this was very good! very moving and well expressed! keep up the awesome work!

Good poem using glass as you path to walk and pain works well as glass is clear but deadly.
take care look at mine too please.
can you comment on "Balance" please
take care
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This poem is unique I really like it. It didn't have to rhyme very well done. Again another great poem 5/5!