Nice poem... Good flow and good theme.. I was about to write something similar to this. Now i changed my mind. YOu have done it very well...:)

great poem...the flow of the words was wonderful, i also loved the theme you chose for it! very creative! ***** stars!

It was a good poem! I loved the theme, very original!

You are so right. I love how you put that into a poem. Great job.

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hey very nice poem i really liked it!!! i has a lot of stlye and orinality in it!

OMG! thats really good, i think you could have a future in poem writing! So it would be so great if u keep writing! AWSOME WORK! NICE CHOICE OF WORDS!

This is really good, I really like it, it is well thought out and nicely written. Its different and thats what I like about it...LiL One

You are very creative well worth a 5!!!!

This poem kicks @$$. I have gone to church in a long time and never learned the seven sins, so I thank u for telling me. Know that I know them I agree with what you say on how the sins aren’t really sin. No one, not even the person who wrote them down could ever live by not doing on of those at least once. So in a way we are all d@mmed to the underwourld.

very good i like it alot

Ah, i loved that piece.. very creative. i've always been fascinated with the seven "deadly sins" and this is a view in a totally different light.. liked the originality,..

Sloth? To want to relax in your evergreen palace,
And to savour its beauty, whilst drinking from my chalice.

that was my fav line, though they were all good.. i really dont have any critique, unfortunately.. this is a pretty good piece.. loved the way you used the language, it gave it a unique quality to it all as well.. good job! 5/5