Comments : Forever Gone

  • 20 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    I love this! I've read all your poems! Superb! Can't wait til you post more!!

  • 20 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    I thought the 3rd stanza was particularly true. "A fool of me to think " I didn't think this line made a lot of sense, it should be something more like: It was foolish.... but that takes up a lot of space.

  • 20 years ago

    by Andrea

    wow, excellent poem!