by HOLLY ARMER
I love this! I've read all your poems! Superb! Can't wait til you post more!! |
by Sean Allen
I thought the 3rd stanza was particularly true. "A fool of me to think " I didn't think this line made a lot of sense, it should be something more like: It was foolish.... but that takes up a lot of space. |
by Andrea
wow, excellent poem! |