WOW! awesome poem, Trincy! The repeats just fit so naturally...great work!

Hey great poem, it was very eerie, I liked it. It was a cool format you put it in too, I just might try it. Good job, keep writing.
Love,

-Blue

rondel...interesting form...great poem... :-)

awesome addition, Trincy! Great work!

This poem is amazing !!!!!! You really have a gift !!!!! Youw rite really good and use a large variety of words.

Mario,
Everybody has his or her own views. I wrote the poem with certain ideas in my mind. While you read the poem, you might have tried to relate it with what you feel. We both may not think the same. When i am the author of the poem, how can you say that it made no sense to me?

I wrote the poem in a metaphoric point of view. It was not about light or darkness. It is about one helpless person worrying, as a blackmailer is about to shatter his/her life.

You analyzed my poem, word by word. But your conclusion made me laugh. I appreciate the time you spent for reading, analyzing and commenting on my poems. I admit that you have helped me to correct some grammar mistakes.(thanks a lot!) But I don’t agree with your writing style. You pointed out the uneven meter of my poems an error, which I felt was too much of criticism. If your intensions were to push me towards perfection, then I appreciate your effort. But you must understand, technically, I have learnt nothing about poems and English is my second language. P&Q helped me to learn a lot.

Anyhow. Thanks for your time and sincere suggessions!
Love, Trincy.

Thanks to all those who spend time to read this poem and leave some comments. It truly means a lot!

gr888 job trincy....nice selection of words i must add.....keep writing!!!