Okay..this poem is AMAZING!!!!...I love it soooo sooo sooo much!!!!!
WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW..
Great job!!! 5!!!!!
luv elizabeth

i really liked the ending the best! i really like the way u think though, it reminds me of how i used to think.

I read this poem again..and I MUST comment AGAIN..because..I dont know why ppl are commenting on it and rating it fives!!! This is one of my favorite poems ever!!!! SOmething about it is soo wonderfula nd powerful and true!!! amazing!! I love your poems!!!!