by Terray Jul 28, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
I'm broken inside of this body, |
by Amy
Very well written. Great work! |
by Marta
that was a very good poem. i especially liked the part how you described your body being broken inside but glued together on the outside. that was amazing, keep on writing, i gave you a 5, you very much so deserved it. oh! and thanks for your comment :) keep it up. |